Feedback on DPS Practise 1

The colour spotting of the image makes it n effective picture as well as the strong bold text. The texts compliments the image well as it is a strong piece. I like the fact the title has America within it as this is a compliment to her American flag top she is wearing making a clear connection between the story and the image. I also like the fact the image works all across the page, never the less her arm is slightly over the fold and this could of being better without that. I think the apostrophe and the smiley face are unnecessary because they are not doing anything for the story so they should be taken out, other than that I am impressed and it works well. It would be even better by tweaking those little things.