Name of person giving feedback: Kristina Lamb
The blog is really good. Youve included some really good posts and put as much detail on your blog as possible! You've definitely thought about every aspect of your magazine.
Strengths of front cover:
-All the colours on the cover match, your colour scheme really ties in with the genre as well.
- You've included a lot of good conventioal features which makes your magzine look really proffesional.
Improvements:
-You havent really included much about your main article feature, it may be a good idea to maybe right a sentence more about the article.
- The border round the barcode looks a bit out of place.
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